Wednesday 16 February 2011

Journal Post 14/02/2011





This week and last week has all been a bit of a rush with trying to get our editing done and as a result of this I did't manage to keep up with my production journal. Part of our feedback was to get rid of the shots of the wall as they gave away too much of our vampire. Once we had done that it seemed complete but just needed improving. Some improvements that we think we may need to add are:

  • Some shots of the vampire, for example, an extreme close up of him wiping blood off of his mouth, and someone holding a photo of Emily (the victim) listening to the song 'Creep' grieving.
  • Thinking about music that sounds better with our title sequence because there aren't any lyrics to our song as we never managed to get them recorded due to timing between us and the girl that was going to sing it.

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